Edetha DM
#11
Character: Ewald R.
Which Event: Operation W.

Responsiveness: 10/10. Very quick to respond to everyone despite there being five players!
Balance: 8.5/10. Final battle was really interesting due to its gimmick!
Storytelling: 10/10. There is feeling betrayed, and then there was that weird Nethradin amalgamation suffering for all eternity due to a catastrophic meltdown.
Fairness: 8/10. Most of this event was very fair! But among us. Sus squadies.

Overall: 9/10! Truly loved this event!

Any other comments:

That shit-talking Roomba tho.
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#12
Character: Rozen Vorso
Which Event: Operation W.

Responsiveness (Were their narrations posted within a reasonable time-frame and were they quick to respond?): Everything was pretty fast and detailed. (10/10)


Balance (How entertaining were the battles, and any obstacles/traps?):  We go through one big major battle and it have a very fun gimmick to go through but what entertain me most in this event was... The choices you make us the decide , the way that you make us not in trust each other.(10/10)


Storytelling (Did it feel like an adventure, did the content of the narrations meet your expectations?):  To be honest story telling in this event was very good, make me even angry on some of those moments (In a good way) as it makes me want to beat up the guy right in front of me. Make sure that he got what he deserved and stuff.  Everything was great! You are a great storyteller! (10000/10)


Fairness (Were the punishments justified and earned, was the risk to reward ratio good?): Main battle we go through rather end too quick then I was expected and feel a bit easy but! This also covered up the small mind games you did! (Though I still wanted to beat that train engine a bit more :< ) (8.5/10)

Overall:
I think this event was pretty good in every way, the story you presented to us was very nice, the difficult options you presented were nice and the mechanic you set up for the boss you wanted us to fight was very enjoyable. I enjoyed every piece of it very very much.

GET THIS DM!!
(9/ 10)

Extra Comment:

TRASH TALKING ROOMBA!TRASH TALKING ROOMBA!TRASH TALKING ROOMBA!TRASH TALKING ROOMBA! 
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#13
Character: Klaus
Which Event: Operation W.

Responsiveness:  (100/10)
Balance : (8/10)
Storytelling : (10/10)
Fairness: (10/10)

Overall: Edetha you are always good!
(9/ 10)

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#14
I have returned to Eternia, and am once again willing to take events.

I am however very picky with what I will do.

All responses ABOVE this post are regarding events I ran in E3/Esshar.

Responses BELOW this post are regarding events I ran in E4/Meranthe.
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#15
Lets ask the Stars for help (mini Event)

Dm review.

char: nera


loved it was neaty. DM repsonded quickly and very good

i rate it a 12/10 was fun. would do again ghave great dev
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#16
Character: Grey Aundeoth
Event: Aen Relief effort

DM responded quickly, EC fight was hectic but fun, use of special skills and stats were made to get better outcomes, items were interesting. I enjoyed myself quite a bit, even if I was exhausted IRL from other things.

Fun time, would reccomend.
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#17
Character: Dunsman S. Viridi
Which Event: Through Sand And Dust

Responsiveness: 10/10. Very quick to response and very quick to adapt upon changes!
Balance: 10/10. The ECs were not very overpowered yet not all that weak either.
Storytelling: 10/10. It conveyed all that I expected out of a road through unforgiving desert and dealing with a beastkin racist nation.
Fairness: 10/10. Despite having a character remotely involved into the story, during the DMing process he detached himself completely from it and even went beyond only to make sure that his role as a DM does not bring the character any benefit. The word Fairness does not do justice to his efforts but rather, Professionalism.

Overall: 10/10. Would recommend his services for any Aen related events.
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#18
Event Aen relif convey

Responsiveness:  10/10


Balance: 10/10

Storytelling:  11/10
Overall: 12/10

fun event, minigames. funny storry telling and nera got a comfy cardboard box as a revward
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#19
Character: Oliphr Ishiko
Responsiveness: 10/10
Balance: 11/10

DM was responsive and made the event fun, I liked the minigame and the 5v2 on two occasions, was a nice change of pace for fights.
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#20
Character: Adir Iphne
Event Name: Wheeled Menace

Responsiveness: 10/10, responses and narrations were quick and detailed, never felt like they were being absent or delaying. Perfect score here.

(I'm splitting the balance category between gameplay challenges and roleplay challenges)
Gameplay Balance: 9/10, we had two encounters, one smaller fight and one boss fight. Both were fun, felt well-setup, and felt genuinely risky but not in an unwinnable way. The only real complaint I have here is that the fights were honestly a bit too easy in some ways, but we also had a really powerful party and this event was ran a decent while after we gave our character information so we were all a decent bit stronger than anticipated as well, so kind of expected. It's not like they were at all cakewalks, either, as we did have some folk go down and I always did feel at risk of being taken out. Really good score, little complaints here.
The DM was also really dedicated to making these fights interesting, going so far as having two computers going to control multiple enemies at once, as a bonus positive.

Roleplay Balance: 10/10, the roleplay and dice-roll challenges were all done really well, felt interesting, and the difficulties on them all made sense and felt like a challenge, without feeling completely unwinnable. DM also offered extra really neat additions to dice-roll based challenges, such as characters being able to roll to 'assist' another teammate in doing the main hard roll, to make the difficulty check a bit lower. No complaints, these were really nice.

Storytelling: 11/10 right off the bat, the storytelling and narrations were wonderfully done, even with little UI manipulations to make the scene feel more immersive. The dedication to making it feel involved was supreme. I genuinely cannot think of a single issue, big or small, I had with this category. The story was interesting, including a very impactful twist to it that I wasn't expecting when we had first suggested the event, and it felt like the choices we took story-wise had very significant impact on the journey. The small less-important narrations like how the party reached the location were even beautifully done. It felt like we are genuinely moving forward through an adventure, and we were given ample opportunity to influence the storytelling ourselves with roleplay. The story also came to a satisfying conclusion, it made me feel like the reason we had gone there from an IC perspective was genuinely resolved. Legitimately cannot think of how the DM could've gotten a better score here.

Fairness: 10/10. The challenges were all difficult but fair, punishments were fairly dished out and were not by any means overboard, and rewards were dished out fairly and in a logical way with what we'd done. I never once felt like we were punished for no reason, nor that we were unfairly held back from receiving a reward. Everything was well thought-out, made sense, and felt perfectly fair. All of the rewards were done well and made sense in the setting and in regards to the challenge we completed to receive them. They all also had enough ambiguity to serve many uses, there weren't any super one-track or useless rewards, they all had a good amount of value. Relative to the difficulty in receiving them, these rewards were all quite fitting, and I didn't feel in any case that the reward didn't match the challenge to receive it. By the end, everyone was able to come away with something that they felt made it worth it.
In most cases, we were also given the chance to weigh whether we'd like to tackle the challenge to get the reward or if we'd rather just keep moving if it didn't interest any of us, which is something I appreciate heavily.

Overall: Easy 10/10, I cannot to any real degree imagine how the DM could've pulled off this event better. Get this DM if you can help it, absolutely wonderful experience all around.
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