Penguin DM
#24
Character: Miyumi S. Irontail
 
Event:
 Fangxiangshi

Responsiveness: I've no issue with the time waited for narrates, most of it needed plenty fast and it wasn't the issue that kept us waiting. Every scenario had a different emotion and feel, great work.
 

Balance: The balance of the event plenty fine on the damage side, perhaps just a bit more HP would've led to more danger, say ~10-15%. But that isn't a big deal at all, many times people were left teetering on the edge, myself included. I think you did wonderful, especially considering this is your return after a break.
 
Storytelling: You did a great job to include everyone is some way, whether small or large. Especially with your ability to coordinate the special guests. While the scene was long it was very moving and carried a lot of weight for the story moving forward. I am happy for the inclusion, thank you!
 
Fairness: No complaints, I felt like I was rewarded for my time and I'm happy with what I was able to achieve in walking away. Both from a mechanical viewpoint and especially from a story viewpoint. It wasn't an event meant for me, but with your inclusion of our special guests it carried a lot more IC weight.
 
Overall: Fantastic event, though it did run a little long (~10 hours) I wasn't complaining during any parts of it and probably would've been able to sit an hour or two longer if needed. Most of the extra time came through people's interaction with what was happening. Though a few small things likely could've been cut, we were warned it would be long entering, so I don't hold it to you.
 
The one thing I would change is likely adding the inclusion of the guests to the end, only so others who couldn't manage to stick around the entire time due to IRL needs got to experience everything outside of the surprise.
 
Thank you for running the event and assisting people in moving forward in their story! It takes a your personal time to plan and run these things, and you clearly took out your time to make this the best you could. Spiriting new things, finding images for every scene change and background, researching people's backgrounds and throwing in things around it. Even coordinating with players outside of the event cast. You did excellent and I hope you're happy with yourself.
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Penguin DM - by Penguin - 05-18-2021, 06:30 AM
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