[Galion]

Which Event: Hunt the Oscuri

Responsiveness:
Mal is very quick to write and respond.

Balance:
There was a sense of oppressiveness to the fight without ever being immediately and totally unfair. It is not an impossibility to play these fights without an invuln, even if it can be really hard to get out of difficult positions. But, with the tidal type spells used, there was always a level of predictability to it all. There was a feeling, that there was a system despite the madness of the fight.

Fuck water dome though!! That arena had way too many obstacles at the edges to begin with for the arena to get completely flooded.

Also the game of hangman was good.

Storytelling:
It was fun. I think this is the star point of Mal's events that makes him deserve glazing.

The event was grotesque and insane, exactly as you might expect from an oscuri who is 'crashing out'. It emphasized a strong sense of lunacy molded by 'a long lifespan' with the 'fighty' nature of these beings. Alongside this, his ability for building setting and characterization. Mal very obviously knows what he's doing. It only makes me wish there was more- given it was a shortform event, interactivity was minimal.

Fairness:

Honestly? I am not sure. I am a bit negative in this prospect, because my undiagnosed adhd desires immediate stimulation and results.
The event was exactly as stated: Difficult with a Chance of Death. We rolled a critical injury and two other perms out of a group of five on an extremely difficult fight for 15 tokens (or 15,000 coins) each. The fight itself was extraordinarily tough and risky, and we most certainly paid a price in blood.

There is perhaps something more to come out of all of this, but only time will tell.


Overall:
Mal is an incredible writer. Regardless of the bits of negative feelings toward the event, my opinion of him is positive and will be evermore. I think everyone should have the opportunity to experience an event ran by him. 

There isn't too much more to say. This was a 'short event' in the 3-4 hour range (idr i didnt watch the clock).
Which- I think the game genuinely needs a lot more of. 6-8+ Hour Events can be very tedious.
Makes it easier to lock in for the duration.

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