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Key/Character: Mortimer
Which Event: To Dance Beneath The Crescent Moon

Responsiveness (Were their narrations posted within a reasonable time-frame and were they quick to respond?): I'd say due to the conflicting time zones and other situations the narrates weren't the FASTEST but they were in a good enough time frame in my opinion that I really had no personal issues with since we planned around things potentially taking long.

Balance (How entertaining were the battles, and any obstacles/traps?): The battles were entertaining and VERY much ramped up as we progressed eventually making us feel like we're definitely fighting for our life. The final, FINAL fight especially was EVIL in the good way.

Storytelling (Did it feel like an adventure, did the content of the narrations meet your expectations?): A combination of both narration but also the general ic of the event, something that was built up over the course of this character's entire existence finally culminating in a defining moment pushing them into a 'new' arc. Seeing some of these older characters reunite while some of the newer PCs got to learn of the dynamics from back in the older days on the Crescent Isle was raw.

Fairness (Were the punishments justified and earned, was the risk to reward ratio good?) I'd say very much so honestly. They adjusted and adapted accordingly to the various decisions/changes we had to make. The scarab clutched.

Overall: 10/10 for me. First time I REALLY felt something writing after a long time.

Any other comments: God bless the fucking scarab.