[The Iron Jaw]

Hello...
I am The Iron Jaw...
I have been told it may be a neat idea to do some DMing, so I'm giving it a try. I have some doubts about my capability, but heck- let's see where it goes.

Character:
Which Event:
Responsiveness (Were their narrations posted within a reasonable time-frame and were they quick to respond?):
Balance (How entertaining were the battles, and any obstacles/traps?): 
Storytelling (Did it feel like an adventure, did the content of the narrations meet your expectations?):
Fairness (Were the punishments justified and earned, was the risk to reward ratio good?)
Overall:
Any other comments: