[Dandeli]

Character: Melionette Meandersong
Which Event: Melionette's Fishing Mishap

Responsiveness (Were their narrations posted within a reasonable time-frame and were they quick to respond?): 10/10; above average scene-setting and exemplary NPCs. Rich and well-characterised. A perfect level of complexity, too - never demanded too much of my 1 IQ brain, nor too little! Admirably fast responses - Barnet has very fast brain cogs.

Balance (How entertaining were the battles, and any obstacles/traps?): Well done, all things considering. Good use of flash spells; box got crowded at times, but at no point was it 'too much,' nor beyond counterplay. Adapted decently to the fact half the party had healing spells! Next time, you should kill us all.

Storytelling (Did it feel like an adventure, did the content of the narrations meet your expectations?): Yes!

Fairness (Were the punishments justified and earned, was the risk to reward ratio good?): Yes!

Overall: Brilliant event. Full marks!

Any other comments: izmael aubreen