Key/Character: Ro
Which Event: Are we worthy?
Responsiveness (Were their narrations posted within a reasonable time-frame and were they quick to respond?): Fast narrates.
Balance (How entertaining were the battles, and any obstacles/traps?): The first fight needed some work. However, you quickly adjusted and made things very, very difficult. Not the type of difficult that made it impossible, but the diffiuclt that made my heart pump and struck fear into my tiny asshole. Continue to do such a thing.
Storytelling (Did it feel like an adventure, did the content of the narrations meet your expectations?): Your story telling will need slight improvement. However, your improv is the best thing about your events. The way that you align the past and present into one thing is so beautiful that it made me happy and shook the very core of my ball hair. Truly, you are something else, and would like more events from you.
Fairness (Were the punishments justified and earned, was the risk to reward ratio good?) Pretty fair. You beamed me for 5x20.
Overall: 10/10
Any other comments: When's part two?
Which Event: Are we worthy?
Responsiveness (Were their narrations posted within a reasonable time-frame and were they quick to respond?): Fast narrates.
Balance (How entertaining were the battles, and any obstacles/traps?): The first fight needed some work. However, you quickly adjusted and made things very, very difficult. Not the type of difficult that made it impossible, but the diffiuclt that made my heart pump and struck fear into my tiny asshole. Continue to do such a thing.
Storytelling (Did it feel like an adventure, did the content of the narrations meet your expectations?): Your story telling will need slight improvement. However, your improv is the best thing about your events. The way that you align the past and present into one thing is so beautiful that it made me happy and shook the very core of my ball hair. Truly, you are something else, and would like more events from you.
Fairness (Were the punishments justified and earned, was the risk to reward ratio good?) Pretty fair. You beamed me for 5x20.
Overall: 10/10
Any other comments: When's part two?