[ludster]

Character: orain ven pelleaux
Which Event: pelleauxes and the hallway of secrets

Responsiveness: this man writes so fast that i blink and see a new narrate on the screen.
Balance: the one fight was neat, the puzzles was an array of things that range from easy to hard (which is good). it felt like an escape room type of event and i absolutely had a treat playing in it. i never trusted the horse one second btw.
Storytelling: the event req didnt have much of a story to go off of, but we ended up w a cute story of friendship thanks to a singular npc and adding a single tag to an item. 
Fairness: this being a light hearted event for kids, everything was fair. failing puzzles had more thematic outcomes rather than just injuries (this added a fun dynamic to rp with throughout the event). im going to steal that idea for CoI events in the future, thanks buddy.

Overall: emilio is my new best friend and if anyone hurts him, i will kill everyone in this room and then myself. 10/10