[Gunner]

Key/Character: Ariadne ven Pelleaux
Which Event: Holy Lands

Responsiveness (Were their narrations posted within a reasonable time-frame and were they quick to respond?): 10/10 Some posts did take a bit, but given the contents and everything that was happening I believe it was warranted. Always appreciate the effort they put into each post. 
Balance (How entertaining were the battles, and any obstacles/traps?): 10/10 The fight we had was fun. wish we got to do the other one but thats not the dms fault. 
Storytelling (Did it feel like an adventure, did the content of the narrations meet your expectations?): 15/10 I wish we all were able to pay attention more and pick up on the little things that were thrown in there that we missed. And the bigger things too that were just glossed over because ... yeah. 
Fairness (Were the punishments justified and earned, was the risk to reward ratio good?): Very fair all things considered. I dont think anyone that received an injury was really upset with it, and the rewards were nice. 

Overall: Sleep is for the Weak(10)/10


Any other comments: I'd like to note that I was prepared for a long ass event at least.... Had a great time regardless <3