01-28-2021, 01:33 AM
Key/Character: Valeria ven Pelleaux
Which Event: The Holy Land
Responsiveness (Were their narrations posted within a reasonable time-frame and were they quick to respond?): Each response was well thought out, so it took some time. However every narration had depth to it and purpose, giving us information and details we might have otherwise missed.
Balance (How entertaining were the battles, and any obstacles/traps?): 10/10 The fight was great! I really liked how everything was choice based, and there were punishments for stupid behavior. Like throwing yourself at a raging demon - I'm lookin' at you, Jericho...
Storytelling (Did it feel like an adventure, did the content of the narrations meet your expectations?): 10/10 This was honestly my favorite part about this event. It was heavily lore based, and I myself learned quite a few things I otherwise hadn't known previously. It was informative and very fun and exciting. It was super fun to take Valeria to a new place to complete her own little 'mission' of faith. Great story telling and I am so appreciative of the well thought out lore and information! <3
Fairness (Were the punishments justified and earned, was the risk to reward ratio good?): More than fair with punishments and rewards. Injuries were given to people who made bad decisions - clear ones, at that.
Overall: 10/10
I was seeking an event to help Valeria grow more in her faith, and that's exactly what I got. It was long and ran late but it was SO worth it - and every moment was super engaging and enjoyable! Will definitely request again, I appreciate you <3 We will make sure to run it earlier next time, haha!
Which Event: The Holy Land
Responsiveness (Were their narrations posted within a reasonable time-frame and were they quick to respond?): Each response was well thought out, so it took some time. However every narration had depth to it and purpose, giving us information and details we might have otherwise missed.
Balance (How entertaining were the battles, and any obstacles/traps?): 10/10 The fight was great! I really liked how everything was choice based, and there were punishments for stupid behavior. Like throwing yourself at a raging demon - I'm lookin' at you, Jericho...
Storytelling (Did it feel like an adventure, did the content of the narrations meet your expectations?): 10/10 This was honestly my favorite part about this event. It was heavily lore based, and I myself learned quite a few things I otherwise hadn't known previously. It was informative and very fun and exciting. It was super fun to take Valeria to a new place to complete her own little 'mission' of faith. Great story telling and I am so appreciative of the well thought out lore and information! <3
Fairness (Were the punishments justified and earned, was the risk to reward ratio good?): More than fair with punishments and rewards. Injuries were given to people who made bad decisions - clear ones, at that.
Overall: 10/10
I was seeking an event to help Valeria grow more in her faith, and that's exactly what I got. It was long and ran late but it was SO worth it - and every moment was super engaging and enjoyable! Will definitely request again, I appreciate you <3 We will make sure to run it earlier next time, haha!
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