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Character: The One! And Only! Thorn Meztin!!!!
Which Event: Temporal Temple in the Sea of Mirages

Responsiveness (Were their narrations posted within a reasonable time-frame and were they quick to respond?): 10/10! They were with us EVERY STEP of the way!!
Balance (How entertaining were the battles, and any obstacles/traps?): 8/10 The battles were intensely entertaining and fun- I really did enjoy it a lot! They were fun, they had their little gimmicks that made fights practically a minefield.
Storytelling (Did it feel like an adventure, did the content of the narrations meet your expectations?): 10/10!! I really didn't know what to expect but if I had to say it was DEFINITELY pretty cool to have a narrative like this!!
Fairness (Were the punishments justified and earned, was the risk to reward ratio good?): 9/10 I'm very glad I could jump into tank a hit for a friend, and each fight's scaling was excellent! The ONE gripe I have is that the icons went invisible during fights and it got very hard to line things up.
Overall: 9.33/10