12-29-2019, 03:39 AM
Key/Character: GalionKnight/Sophie cos Duran
Which Event: Mystery of the UnderGarden (https://chronicles-of-esshar.com/forum/s...hp?tid=848)
Responsiveness (Were their narrations posted within a reasonable time-frame and were they quick to respond?):
He posted pretty quickly. Event was a bit long, but his speed helped keep it engaging al the way through.
Balance (How entertaining were the battles, and any obstacles/traps?):
It was a bit all over. He took risky routes with AIs, but when things were overwhelming he worked around them ultimately. It made things out into an overcoming odds sort of view. He did warn us at the start also, so it was pretty fair.
Storytelling (Did it feel like an adventure, did the content of the narrations meet your expectations?):
It was fun. His characters had energy to them, and played their roles very well. All throughout, the event was pretty engaging.
Fairness (Were the punishments justified and earned, was the risk to reward ratio good?):
The reward was a little lackluster. A few alchemy reagants. The main goal was obtaining knowledge, but I don't think it was fulfilling on that end. However, to be completely fair on this tidbit, this is intended to be an event chain, so unloading too much would have been silly. As an introduction, it was solid on that point.
Overall:
Jet = Good
If you're looking for storytelling, I think he is one of the most solid choices.
Any other comments:
This was really late, my apologies. I'll update it with more when we do the next part.
Which Event: Mystery of the UnderGarden (https://chronicles-of-esshar.com/forum/s...hp?tid=848)
Responsiveness (Were their narrations posted within a reasonable time-frame and were they quick to respond?):
He posted pretty quickly. Event was a bit long, but his speed helped keep it engaging al the way through.
Balance (How entertaining were the battles, and any obstacles/traps?):
It was a bit all over. He took risky routes with AIs, but when things were overwhelming he worked around them ultimately. It made things out into an overcoming odds sort of view. He did warn us at the start also, so it was pretty fair.
Storytelling (Did it feel like an adventure, did the content of the narrations meet your expectations?):
It was fun. His characters had energy to them, and played their roles very well. All throughout, the event was pretty engaging.
Fairness (Were the punishments justified and earned, was the risk to reward ratio good?):
The reward was a little lackluster. A few alchemy reagants. The main goal was obtaining knowledge, but I don't think it was fulfilling on that end. However, to be completely fair on this tidbit, this is intended to be an event chain, so unloading too much would have been silly. As an introduction, it was solid on that point.
Overall:
Jet = Good
If you're looking for storytelling, I think he is one of the most solid choices.
Any other comments:
This was really late, my apologies. I'll update it with more when we do the next part.