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Character: Manuel Tarniel
Which Event: To Rooted Libraries

Responsiveness (Were their narrations posted within a reasonable time-frame and were they quick to respond?): Quick to respond, very little waiting time.
Balance (How entertaining were the battles, and any obstacles/traps?): This is the only part I felt was a little unbalanced. The puzzles were mostly luck based, aside from the book one (which Seraphina nailed). The bosses were mostly good aside from the last one, which had a LOT of area denial. I didn't mind it that much, but maybe tone it down next time? This is more just an opinion for me. 8.5/10
Storytelling (Did it feel like an adventure, did the content of the narrations meet your expectations?): The storytelling made me feel sad for the people that were in the library. It made me wonder what happened even if I was the one that made the hook. 10/10
Fairness (Were the punishments justified and earned, was the risk to reward ratio good?): The rewards are awesome, I love the item I got! 10/10

Overall: 9/10

Any other comments: Go the fuck to bed.
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