03-02-2020, 02:13 AM
Key/Character: Galynn Sulis
Which Event: Blade of Honor
Responsiveness (Were their narrations posted within a reasonable time-frame and were they quick to respond?): 12/10 They were extremely fast and showed a lot of great preparation and insight.
Balance (How entertaining were the battles, and any obstacles/traps?): 7/10 It was your first even you ran by yourself, and we had a few smol issues here and there but it worked out in the end. Can't really fault, but as long as we all learned from it it'll be better in the future! <3
Storytelling (Did it feel like an adventure, did the content of the narrations meet your expectations?): 12/10 I can't stress enough how great the story was, I was blown away and I could not ask for anything to have been better in this regard. Probably one of if not the best I've ever been on in terms of raw story.
Fairness (Were the punishments justified and earned, was the risk to reward ratio good?): 9/10 Going by rewards tossed out on other events I've been on, and seen other people return from recently.. I think the others could have gotten a bit more. (Though this is mostly because of the injury scale used, had we been less prepared we really could have been in a mess.)
Overall: 11/10
Any other comments: I would either shift to the standard injury scale, or perhaps add a step or three to the one you have, but no one should be at risk of death after the first encounter and not roll a single one between two rolls. Not a insult to you, just an opinion, even if it worked out in the end.. whew that could have been terrible.
Which Event: Blade of Honor
Responsiveness (Were their narrations posted within a reasonable time-frame and were they quick to respond?): 12/10 They were extremely fast and showed a lot of great preparation and insight.
Balance (How entertaining were the battles, and any obstacles/traps?): 7/10 It was your first even you ran by yourself, and we had a few smol issues here and there but it worked out in the end. Can't really fault, but as long as we all learned from it it'll be better in the future! <3
Storytelling (Did it feel like an adventure, did the content of the narrations meet your expectations?): 12/10 I can't stress enough how great the story was, I was blown away and I could not ask for anything to have been better in this regard. Probably one of if not the best I've ever been on in terms of raw story.
Fairness (Were the punishments justified and earned, was the risk to reward ratio good?): 9/10 Going by rewards tossed out on other events I've been on, and seen other people return from recently.. I think the others could have gotten a bit more. (Though this is mostly because of the injury scale used, had we been less prepared we really could have been in a mess.)
Overall: 11/10
Any other comments: I would either shift to the standard injury scale, or perhaps add a step or three to the one you have, but no one should be at risk of death after the first encounter and not roll a single one between two rolls. Not a insult to you, just an opinion, even if it worked out in the end.. whew that could have been terrible.