01-25-2023, 11:18 PM
Character: Sean Shepard
Which Event: Abolish the Dark, Scorn His Name: Felyraxes
Responsiveness: Interactions, choices, 'dice rolls' were the culmination of the event. The narration of introduction and post-combat would be a good choice. Avoiding using narrations in the middle of rounds would have helped to manipulate the time more appropriately (That was the main problem in my opinion) but nothing that can't be improved in the future.[7/10]
Balance: The first 'boss'? Well, this was pretty easy. The second? Ok, things were starting to get harder. And I feel that it wasn't so much the lack of preparation, I believe it was a lack of tact or experience as a DM to manage that part - either way the fights delivered the fun - but not really fair.[8/10]
Storytelling: If it weren't for the lack of time, in particular my time too - this event could have become EVEN MORE interesting than it was for me. I don't have to complain, it served its purpose and felt within my character's purpose as an Aen cadet - here was the best part. (I'm sorry I left early, by the way. I really wanted to see the final outcome.)[9.5/10]
Fairness: It was an HCOI event, I went down in two rounds and got my injury. It's part of it, I don't think there were any mistakes here, it's a shame that at that moment I was a bit 'rushing'. The injury was pretty well described, so it's just a win-win.[10/10]
Overall: I have nothing to complain about the story as far as I was able to participate, it entertained me, captivated me. The biggest issue was time management with combat and balancing with bosses. Things that can be better worked on in the future, however, the rest went to my liking.
As an Overall note I'd give an [8/10]
Which Event: Abolish the Dark, Scorn His Name: Felyraxes
Responsiveness: Interactions, choices, 'dice rolls' were the culmination of the event. The narration of introduction and post-combat would be a good choice. Avoiding using narrations in the middle of rounds would have helped to manipulate the time more appropriately (That was the main problem in my opinion) but nothing that can't be improved in the future.[7/10]
Balance: The first 'boss'? Well, this was pretty easy. The second? Ok, things were starting to get harder. And I feel that it wasn't so much the lack of preparation, I believe it was a lack of tact or experience as a DM to manage that part - either way the fights delivered the fun - but not really fair.[8/10]
Storytelling: If it weren't for the lack of time, in particular my time too - this event could have become EVEN MORE interesting than it was for me. I don't have to complain, it served its purpose and felt within my character's purpose as an Aen cadet - here was the best part. (I'm sorry I left early, by the way. I really wanted to see the final outcome.)[9.5/10]
Fairness: It was an HCOI event, I went down in two rounds and got my injury. It's part of it, I don't think there were any mistakes here, it's a shame that at that moment I was a bit 'rushing'. The injury was pretty well described, so it's just a win-win.[10/10]
Overall: I have nothing to complain about the story as far as I was able to participate, it entertained me, captivated me. The biggest issue was time management with combat and balancing with bosses. Things that can be better worked on in the future, however, the rest went to my liking.
As an Overall note I'd give an [8/10]