03-08-2023, 12:20 AM
Attack of the Master Skeleton - Public Event
RESPONSIVENESS: 10/10
BALANCE: 8/10
STORYTELLING: 3/10
FAIRNESS: 9/10
OVERALL: 7/10
Tips,
- Instead of trying to narrate each second countdown, just say 'Counting down in [x] seconds' in a narrate then use the /countdown command.
- I realize this is your first public event and mostly something experimental, but I think more of a story focus would be nice. Lack of backstory and lore in this instance. Even if it's a minor hook like, 'The Nation of [ ] is enlisting volunteer magi to defeat a rogue anomaly... the caravan leaves in twenty minutes'. Flesh things out just to a degree and it'll elevate the experience nicely.
- No complaints about anything else!!! Good mini-event.
RESPONSIVENESS: 10/10
BALANCE: 8/10
STORYTELLING: 3/10
FAIRNESS: 9/10
OVERALL: 7/10
Tips,
- Instead of trying to narrate each second countdown, just say 'Counting down in [x] seconds' in a narrate then use the /countdown command.
- I realize this is your first public event and mostly something experimental, but I think more of a story focus would be nice. Lack of backstory and lore in this instance. Even if it's a minor hook like, 'The Nation of [ ] is enlisting volunteer magi to defeat a rogue anomaly... the caravan leaves in twenty minutes'. Flesh things out just to a degree and it'll elevate the experience nicely.
- No complaints about anything else!!! Good mini-event.