Character: Cinis
Which Event: The White Rabbit
Responsiveness (Were their narrations posted within a reasonable time-frame and were they quick to respond?): It was quick as far as I was concerned, I enjoyed it. It's not to say they cannot improve but they're already at a good pace within reason. Sometimes it was a little slowed but it was worth it due to the theme of the event itself being about Alice and Wonder land/Fairy Tales. So working up the proper posts was good.
Balance (How entertaining were the battles, and any obstacles/traps?): Very kind and fair, it was nice when they told us about warnings. Even if some of them scared me shitless. The fights were fun and the creatures were narratively theme fitting and fun. I look forward to the next one.
Storytelling (Did it feel like an adventure, did the content of the narrations meet your expectations?): As I said before, it was a well put themeatic story telling. I can't imagine it was easy to pull off but it was still something that I enjoyed. I hope he can do it again>
Fairness (Were the punishments justified and earned, was the risk to reward ratio good?): From what I saw yes, hell we just had someone convert their temp into a perm because they enjoyed it that much. I don't quite know what that says about the wounds but it should be a statement about their writing. As for rewards, They too fit the story. Though I do agree that I think being a little more clear-cut who gets what would be helpful.
Overall: 8/10
Any other comments: Using Murderous Surge doesn't work on me dumb dumb.
Which Event: The White Rabbit
Responsiveness (Were their narrations posted within a reasonable time-frame and were they quick to respond?): It was quick as far as I was concerned, I enjoyed it. It's not to say they cannot improve but they're already at a good pace within reason. Sometimes it was a little slowed but it was worth it due to the theme of the event itself being about Alice and Wonder land/Fairy Tales. So working up the proper posts was good.
Balance (How entertaining were the battles, and any obstacles/traps?): Very kind and fair, it was nice when they told us about warnings. Even if some of them scared me shitless. The fights were fun and the creatures were narratively theme fitting and fun. I look forward to the next one.
Storytelling (Did it feel like an adventure, did the content of the narrations meet your expectations?): As I said before, it was a well put themeatic story telling. I can't imagine it was easy to pull off but it was still something that I enjoyed. I hope he can do it again>
Fairness (Were the punishments justified and earned, was the risk to reward ratio good?): From what I saw yes, hell we just had someone convert their temp into a perm because they enjoyed it that much. I don't quite know what that says about the wounds but it should be a statement about their writing. As for rewards, They too fit the story. Though I do agree that I think being a little more clear-cut who gets what would be helpful.
Overall: 8/10
Any other comments: Using Murderous Surge doesn't work on me dumb dumb.