[Truwarrior119]

Character: Galland Silvanas

Which Event: What IS that?!

Responsiveness (Were their narrations posted within a reasonable time-frame and were they quick to respond?): The responsiveness of Mal's narration's were excellent and swift. Not long after everyone would post their RP, they would consider what was written among the group, each leading to a cohesive story even with our inclusions. Top tier. Especially for how long it went on, he did great! 10/10

Balance (How entertaining were the battles, and any obstacles/traps?): The scariest and funnest parts most certainly. Each battle had a good sense of balance to it, there were moments were the desperation of the situation, mixed with the dread and feel there should be for it. The way the fights were set up and paced ensuring such exact feelings at times among the group. But there were ways we could overcome these difficulties, overall they may have had great power but way to get past such if we were crafty! 10/10!

Storytelling (Did it feel like an adventure, did the content of the narrations meet your expectations?): This was of course, the greatest part of it all.

The story hit in many ways that I loved, notes that personally related to Galland in a way that shaped his characters story even beyond the event.

The beginning of the tale began with the foreboding threat to be, encountering a solo battle initially, then being ambushed. It was a great start and the flavour's that followed after only added to the overall spook, even as Galland examined and took a small sample of the first 'thing'. When we encountered the trio at the campsite, and delved in with a little more information did it really give insight to the wild story to come. This was no simple monster hunt.

Upon entering the second act, we encountered a really neat puzzle, one we could investigate and really scratch our heads over for a moment. Luckily, we managed to solve it in time before the ominous ticking came to an end... Whatever it would have brought.

With the mind games that followed, and hearing of the actual atrocities committed by the Villain(s), it further committed the group to the mission at hand. Tugged at heart strings and really made the characters feel for those they had to unfortunately face. Following our merciful act upon that poor boy, Patrick- we encountered the second boss.

A really cool feature followed as the DM really melded the story with our actions, giving us an opportunity to gain a little bit of an upper hand and really get the most out of every situation we could.

It was the third act that really wrapped the whole thing up, ending in a great and satisfying end. Not only did Galland meet his match and then some, it brought up matters relating to his missing father, giving flavour to some personally related matters that could be further delved into. Dr. Vesper was a scary man, and gaining vengeance for the children and his kin was all he aimed for then. The boon was a really cool addition, allowing us to even the playing field against a deadly foe.

Especially when Vesper really revealed his true strength and greater command of bloodmancy compared to Galland. But the vengeful spirits let him equalize the fight, at a cost! One which was really cool to work with. The entire fight was really cool, made me stress out and sweat but work my damned hardest to help everyone reach victory!

Fairness (Were the punishments justified and earned, was the risk to reward ratio good?)

Yes, the fairness of it all was quite perfect. The rewards we obtained were tailored quite excellently to the overall story and theme, the injuries received from all the fights and poor rolls are great, and a nicely tailed final injury was the cherry on top of it all. Loved the item that I got, it was great fun! 10/10

Overall: 10/10! Just perfect.

Any other comments: Mal's an amazing storyteller and a great DM. The event carried on at a great pace, surprised for how much time passed yet it didn't feel like it dragged at all. I loved every second of it, and it really made me try to think of different ways to go about things- where I could.

Thank you so much for running this! It was a blast!