10-02-2023, 04:14 AM
Key/Character: OceanClouds / Hina Lam
Which Event: New Beginnings
Responsiveness: 5/5 - Your timing was absolutely impeccable, and I was surprised by how little time you took per narration! Each one was just as good as the last narrate; I was pretty hyped up throughout the entire event.
Balance: 5/5 - I was quite surprised by how well balanced your ECs were, especially with five post 200 RPL characters there! The first major fight spooked the fuck out of me, especially when I sat in Sven's crystal aoe near his tree for healing, and you threw four tidal waves at me, lmfao. I was screaming, and had to run away immediately to avoid further destruction. Either way, I really enjoyed every fight and thought they were all well balanced. Not too overwhelming, not too underwhelming!
Storytelling: 5/5 - A lot of fun, really! The first portion of the narratives, as explained in my responsiveness critique, hyped me up so much for the entire event. Everything felt very nicely paced, accurate to the story, and you were extremely attentive to all of the RPs and responding nicely. A bit of comedic relief from the first fight was a ton of fun and hilarious. The addition of prompting the character towards Vera Cruz district going up in flames was perfectly immersive despite the grim nature of the war tonight, which was a nice touch to the narrative.
Fairness: 5/5 - HCoI event where all PCs got really nice dev items for themselves according to the lore of the character's stories. It was very wholesome, and I'm incredibly happy with how you described each dev mat you had for the event.
Overall: 1000/100 - Highly recommend Mal for your events. Everything went so smoothly, and I had so much fun. The event itself was adventurous, dangerous, but also lighthearted and hopeful. I hope everyone else had just as much fun and got cool dev out of it all! To top it off, the perm injuries I sustained with Eivor (shared injury) is so fucking wholesome. My expectations were exceeded.
Which Event: New Beginnings
Responsiveness: 5/5 - Your timing was absolutely impeccable, and I was surprised by how little time you took per narration! Each one was just as good as the last narrate; I was pretty hyped up throughout the entire event.
Balance: 5/5 - I was quite surprised by how well balanced your ECs were, especially with five post 200 RPL characters there! The first major fight spooked the fuck out of me, especially when I sat in Sven's crystal aoe near his tree for healing, and you threw four tidal waves at me, lmfao. I was screaming, and had to run away immediately to avoid further destruction. Either way, I really enjoyed every fight and thought they were all well balanced. Not too overwhelming, not too underwhelming!
Storytelling: 5/5 - A lot of fun, really! The first portion of the narratives, as explained in my responsiveness critique, hyped me up so much for the entire event. Everything felt very nicely paced, accurate to the story, and you were extremely attentive to all of the RPs and responding nicely. A bit of comedic relief from the first fight was a ton of fun and hilarious. The addition of prompting the character towards Vera Cruz district going up in flames was perfectly immersive despite the grim nature of the war tonight, which was a nice touch to the narrative.
Fairness: 5/5 - HCoI event where all PCs got really nice dev items for themselves according to the lore of the character's stories. It was very wholesome, and I'm incredibly happy with how you described each dev mat you had for the event.
Overall: 1000/100 - Highly recommend Mal for your events. Everything went so smoothly, and I had so much fun. The event itself was adventurous, dangerous, but also lighthearted and hopeful. I hope everyone else had just as much fun and got cool dev out of it all! To top it off, the perm injuries I sustained with Eivor (shared injury) is so fucking wholesome. My expectations were exceeded.