11-16-2023, 08:54 PM
Character: Alexis
Which Event: Return to Lira Moore
Responsiveness: The event did take 11 hours. This was pretty much the only obstacle for me to calling it a truly perfect event. 7/10 on this front.
Balance: You have an interesting take on event difficulty. While you don't go out of your way to try and down players, you make the consequences of getting downed in a fight a bit more severe as a counterbalance. I like it.
The puzzle-related, random encounter injuries were interesting.
Overall I think it was great, 10/10.
Storytelling: You are a lovely writer that places great detail in everything you write. The narrations were beautiful, and I honestly felt that even despite how long everything took, it was worth the wait. I was engaged from beginning to end.
The overarching narrative of the entire event was great, and I felt like you somehow tailored everything to our characters very well. I don't know how you knew that perseverance actually was a core part of my character's theme, but when I saw that was the solution to my riddle, it was a pretty cool moment. 10/10.
Fairness: I can't really complain, it wasn't an event for my character, so I didn't expect a super cool reward. The stuff that we got across the board as a party though was really cool!
Overall: Fantastic event. Thank you for spending so much time on it.
9.9/10
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Which Event: Return to Lira Moore
Responsiveness: The event did take 11 hours. This was pretty much the only obstacle for me to calling it a truly perfect event. 7/10 on this front.
Balance: You have an interesting take on event difficulty. While you don't go out of your way to try and down players, you make the consequences of getting downed in a fight a bit more severe as a counterbalance. I like it.
The puzzle-related, random encounter injuries were interesting.
Overall I think it was great, 10/10.
Storytelling: You are a lovely writer that places great detail in everything you write. The narrations were beautiful, and I honestly felt that even despite how long everything took, it was worth the wait. I was engaged from beginning to end.
The overarching narrative of the entire event was great, and I felt like you somehow tailored everything to our characters very well. I don't know how you knew that perseverance actually was a core part of my character's theme, but when I saw that was the solution to my riddle, it was a pretty cool moment. 10/10.
Fairness: I can't really complain, it wasn't an event for my character, so I didn't expect a super cool reward. The stuff that we got across the board as a party though was really cool!
Overall: Fantastic event. Thank you for spending so much time on it.
9.9/10
Any other comments: