[Cloutio2x]

Key/Character: Lotte

Event Name: Shadow Wraith Hunt

Responsiveness: Considering it was someone's first time, they used responses well and incorporated a rolling system where they'd need to adjust on the fly. With this in mind, I'd say it was very good. Felt like choises mattered within the responses.

Balance: I agree with the beginning round being underwhelming, but after each battle it quickly grew and became better and better. By the end of it I think it was pretty great and proved a real threat. I hope you get even more creative in the future, I think you're on a good path!

Storytelling: There was clearly a plan for this event from the start and it was able to stick to the theme without heavy railroading. Things naturally seemed to fall in place and things were easy to follow from the start. Times where you felt bad for others, time where you felt entirely the opposite and wanted to get rid of them. Great work.

Fairness: Injuries for failing, bonuses for succeeding. With the injuries given, the rewards handed out seemed very fair. Again, you did a great job especially with this being your first event. The material at the end was also interesting, glad to see it go to hands that will likely use it well.

Overall: Fantastic, especially for a first event. I hope you enjoyed yourself and telling the story you wanted to tell while also entertaining others. An armed EC is very hard to run compared to any other and I think you handled it pretty good! In the future, continue to do things you feel passionate about and write cool things, I'm sure you'll do even better.