[Jumpy]

Key/Character: Bruno pyr Aertas
Which Event: Achlys, the Forgotten Son: Part 2

Responsiveness (Were their narrations posted within a reasonable time-frame and were they quick to respond?): Everything was timely and he made the smart decision of not always waiting for our slow typers in order to get things going fast, while still respecting their RP. Aside from the one time he deleted his own narrate all was swift.
Balance (How entertaining were the battles, and any obstacles/traps?): I really liked when he doubled the power of the EC because we had it too easy. We still won, thus, it was a correct response.
Storytelling (Did it feel like an adventure, did the content of the narrations meet your expectations?): holy fuck. I'm still trembling from everything that happened at the end and everyone on it knows that there's no reason to actually have verb shakes. This was, by far, one of my favorite events. It had me struggle. It had me fight in my own head. It had me embody my character because I couldn't figure out what I would do in the situation. It had me make difficult choices. The lore expanded was insane and the fact I fucking called it in character, only for it to be true but much, much more true than I'd ever thought was INSANE. What the actual hell. This is why I'm not letting you escape without doing the Oasis. My god I can't wait.
Fairness (Were the punishments justified and earned, was the risk to reward ratio good?) I mean I wouldn't know, I never go down. 

Overall: i already edited my journal/10

Any other comments: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

I've never thrown so much away while feeling this good about it.