[Icraft343]

Character: Ehren Kriyer
Which Event: The Grumble Intensifies

Responsiveness (Were their narrations posted within a reasonable time-frame and were they quick to respond?): As soon as everyone's RP is done, he was really quick to give the response to us. At the beginning as well, once all the players are TPd in, he narrated as quick as 10 minutes, which is by far, really fast. 10/10
Balance (How entertaining were the battles, and any obstacles/traps?): *Sharp inhale* AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA THE SWARM IS DANGERAOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUS!!!!  9/10
Storytelling (Did it feel like an adventure, did the content of the narrations meet your expectations?): It followed exactly as I had expected, maybe even more so! I went, whoa... When I was greeted by the Bullet Ant on a throne made of bones surrounded by corpses and children on the holes on the side. 10/10
Fairness (Were the punishments justified and earned, was the risk to reward ratio good?) : The risk was worth it, everyone is given a reward, so no one is without one. In addition, the +5 perm is a good trade off for a dev item. So I'll say, NICE! 10/10

Overall: I love him. He's so good with his storytelling and lore, and that fun fact in the end. But man, he's crazy with the balance. The swarms did 10k damage, and I'm lucky to just get a temp, not a perm. Except for the last part. Just my luck and my lack of teamwork. 9.5/10

Any other comments: :thumbs_up: Would love to have you DM my events. But I really hope that you won't kill me, right...? Right? Hahaha... Ha...