[Jess]

Character: Tyvanny

Which Event: Isle of Aetius

Responsiveness (Were their narrations posted within a reasonable time-frame and were they quick to respond?): All of the narrates were well done and quick considering the volume of people, while keeping enough flavor to the story that it didn't feel like any juicy bits were being left out.

Balance (How entertaining were the battles, and any obstacles/traps?): The stacking roots or volcanoes was a bit rough, but the rest of the kits used were very fun to engage with and offered a lot of room for 'you make a mistake its your fault' which I do appreciate.

Storytelling (Did it feel like an adventure, did the content of the narrations meet your expectations?): Nice story, it gave a lot of cool rp to the kiddos.

Fairness (Were the punishments justified and earned, was the risk to reward ratio good?): 10/10 Overall, very fair in regards to risk/rewards.

Overall: 10/10 No real big complaints

Any other comments: I appreciate the time taken out to run the event, especially recovering from the flu.